[Okay, Odinson feels less concerned now, because your hero is just some super powered human and that's fine. Strongest man who walks the Earth ffffff.
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Enough. Your hero is strong, that is evident enough. You, however, are a poor herald and do him disservice by relating his exploits in so unconvincing a manner.
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More importantly-]
Enough. Your hero is strong, that is evident enough. You, however, are a poor herald and do him disservice by relating his exploits in so unconvincing a manner.